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Hi, Jordin! At first, thank you for the review! ;) "my hours were flowing next to the door where I was waiting for you to take me away." means: I ...

Hello, Cailey! At first, thank you for reading and commenting on my work! ;) This is interesting what you and Polinka say about paragraphs, I'll keep that on my mind ...

at first, thank you for reading my work and for finding it interesting! :D yes, you probably read in my previous reply that this poem was inspired by "The Ring". ...

Dear Polinka, at first, thank you a lot for such a long and constructive comment, I am really pleasantly surprised. I'm glad you liked the poem. Speaking of the construction, ...