Hekelley

First off: WOW! It is amazing the beginning how you had suspense and mystery there. I did find a few errors like a missing ' here and there. Missed some ...

I really like your imagery. The poem is just the right length, sweet and short. Your vocabulary is great. I liked the lines "People spit at her feet, though the ...

This is great! Sort of sad that his dad dies. But still funny.what are inherit ants, and snake spitters. I got confused by when it said his dad went to ...

Wow! This is really good. You had some suspense, it was really well suspenseful. I liked that you didnt really say what the character's name was. Keep it a mystery. ...