Hecate

This is so original. I'm pretty bad at grammar ,so I'll just tell you what I think about it as a piece. it's really ,really original and amazingly interesting. Haha ...

Okay ,here it goes: "I’d always wanted a more better name that I could dig, but I could live with it. " - You can't say MORE better ,you have ...

Here it goes: There were some silly grammar mistakes ,which is probably because you were rushing. They were along these lines "Did mother asked for me?". You just have to ...

this was one of the most beautiful and romantic pieces I've ever read. It was Earth shatteringly beautiful and sad. I can't believe the cruelty of the father ,to kill ...

I think it's pretty good. From what i gathered they're at war ,and that's about it.It's really depressing ,hope it gets lighter . Here's a piece of advice ,and I'm ...

It's really original and totally sweet. It's really cool how you concentrated on two characters that most of the time would have been minor but then you made them the ...

First of all ,I'm new to writing critiques ,I've written a few for other sites ,though. Okay ,so I really liked ,how discriptive it is and how you've managed to ...