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aw thanks!! i have a fan of ME now and not just my stories!!

stella thomas: im really glad you liked the way i did the lyrics, i thought they fit really well into the story and im really glad to hear that others ...

yay sleeping valor found me and is coming to rescue me from the evil grammar and spelling!!!!!! HOORAY!!! thanks :D

thank you so so so so so so so so soooooo much!!! i dont know ANYTHING about grammar. you had me put all those semi-colons in and thats really good ...

that is MUCH better!! and please, i should be the one thanking you for the experience.

hehe no thats perfectly fine, if i took the time to go back to every site i had my work up and change all the mistakes on all of them...lets ...

hahaha yeeeaaaahhh....those were definitely both typos hehe thanks for catching them. and just in case people didnt pick up on it, Lukas doesnt know the names for these shirts but ...

thank you both for your comments!! sleeping valor: i will definitely look back over the story and maybe lead up to Charlie flipping out! aedomir: thanks for reading this chapter ...

thanks for the comments. my thoughts are that in chapter three i was still giving the reader information concerning vampires and at the same time building their characters more. In ...

i liked this part a lot. i definitely dont think you should cut it out. i like the way you described her dream. it was unique in that it was ...

wow that was incredible...i wont comment further because i already left you a list on your last post haha but really good job im going to find the rest of ...

okay okay okay okay that clears A LOT up thanks!! by the way the italics didnt show up....if you had them on some kind of word processor of sorts you ...

A) i am eternally grateful to you for the time you are taking on my writing B )you are on my "favorite people" list C) um....i am eternally grateful to ...

i made that correction. again i cant possibly thank you enough for taking the time to run through my writing over and over again.

haha aw im glad that he surprised you! maybe that means you havent seen a character quite like him before?? also INCREDIBLY happy you LIKE him. i needed to post ...