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Re: A small scenery on earth.
Hey Dark! Hearts here to do a quick review for you. Okay, as I was reading through, I realized that through all these words, I could see a pretty good ...
Sep 15, 2013 -
Re: The Mission of Life
Heya! :) So, overall I loved it and the ending was the one you didn't kind of expect which is a good thing, making a poem on Jesus, it sure ...
Sep 15, 2013 -
Re: Time
Hi, there! Wow, this is good. The perfect truth and you've really described time well. I loved this part:- "Time has heard the lone wolf's cry" That's what I call ...
Sep 15, 2013 -
Re: The Lost Land
I loved this! It kept me hooked and it was very intriguing! :) If you could break up the lines a little more, I think it can be called a ...
Sep 15, 2013 -
Re: Innocence
Wow, this is pretty good. Good job, with the poem. I really liked how you dragged and contemplated the poem to Hitler and it made me bring back a lot ...
May 18, 2013
