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  • Poetry » General, General Re: little sour-dough girl

    The whole image with the integrity righteousness and valor. It doesnt really blend in with the images in the second part. Do you see what I mean?

    May 1, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Science Re: I call space the comfort I'll never have

    Thanks a lot for your review! I'll bear your comments in mind and will try to improve it :D

    Apr 29, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Hello... ...Goodbye

    Aahh it's kinda hard because they are all pretty and work well together. The 4th goodbye one seem to echo what you say after?

    Apr 29, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Science Re: I call space the comfort I'll never have

    thanks! I'll try that next time :D

    Apr 26, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Science Re: I call space the comfort I'll never have

    The format of the verse didn't register, I don't know how to do it, if someone could help !

    Apr 26, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Stranger

    Note: This review has been deleted
    (I'm sorry I posted the review twice and now I don't know how to delete this comment)

    Apr 25, 2023


If you don't know it's impossible it's easier to do. And because nobody's done it before, they haven't made up rules to stop anyone doing that again, yet.
— Neil Gaiman