HeadInTheClouds

It's pretty close for me, but i'd have to say The Lord of the Rings. I agree that Harry Potter is easier to read, but i've outgrown the earlier ones, ...

That was simple, but creepy all the same. *shudders* Most likely because i'm absolutely terrified of spiders. I wasn't quite sure what ate the spider at the end though. At ...

Between the two I would choose HP. Mainly because it's far more original than Inheritance, has more depth, and was actually able to shock me. It's not that Inheritance is ...

I only had time to read the first bit, but it looked like a good start. I do have one suggestion, however. At the beggining you said his voice was ...