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!! Okay, uhhh, where to begin. Motley was initially inspired by a mixture of Victorian London and. I guess early 20th century America, so your guess is pretty good. This ...

This is gr8, bud. Love it. Your voice is amazing - A+

YWS doesn't like apostrophes, oops - that first quote is pretty messy, haha

Tiny thing here, but if you%u2019re describing it as a %u201Creptile man%u201D, you should be able to say he instead of they? The way it is now sounds a bit ...

I wasn't salty!! I just thought I may have sounded so, lel. And n0 this darling must liiive

Lowercase brad was bread, lel. Reminds him of Brad because there's no E in this universe to differentiate between br[e]ad and Brad. Glad you enjoyed! thanks for the review

*a lot

Thanks! If only I'd gotten gold in the event

also oops sorry if i sound salty, not meaning to, i haven't eaten all day

thnx for the review. i'm not sure i'll streamline any of it because poems are difficult enough to write as it is, but yeah. thnx for the pointers

the title is long on purpose, partially making fun of long poem titles and partially because i like it

But I like the tITLE!! lel

also oops sorry, YWS likes to send multiples, lel

Oh, yeah, I ended up not including the milk bit because I thought it'd sorta be paired with a child asking to chase the monsters away (so it was vaguely ...

Oh, yeah, I ended up not including the milk bit because I thought it'd sorta be paired with a child asking to chase the monsters away (so it was vaguely ...