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Re: Tampered - Chapter 1
You can still review it and say what you liked/didn't like or give other suggestions. *shrugs* I just need someone to help with the paragraph breaks. Not everyone who reviews ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: Tampered - Chapter 1
Like, when a paragraph ends and a new one begins. Kinda like how you just went: "Wait... What's a paragraph break?" But on a bigger scale, 'cause it's paragraphs rather ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: Tampered - Chapter 1
I'm only posting this right now because I know it needs editing but I'm... I'm really not smart on these things. So please - please, please, please - someone suggest ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: Faith - Chapter One
Remind me to read this sometime.
Aug 31, 2015 -
Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 7 (Jasmine Jupiter)
*whispers* They're aliens. It's inspired by Hitchhiker's Guide. They don't need plausibility. Kidding, of course. Thanks for the review. It might make a bit more sense if you went and ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Drizzle and Wings
Exactly! People get it! :D XD
Aug 23, 2015 -
Re: Where I'm From
Pssh. That's yo opinion, bro.
Aug 22, 2015 -
Re: Where I'm From
Pssh, grammar doesn't matter in poetry!
Aug 22, 2015 -
Re: Where I'm From
*points to comment below* "Incredibly unnecessary" :P
Aug 22, 2015 -
Re: Where I'm From
The incredibly unnecessary stops and such are intentional, so stop. Put that review down. Good. Now reword everything so the stops and dashes aren't mentioned. *pats* That's a good YWSer.
Aug 22, 2015 -
Re: Dash - Chapter 1 (Before the Dash)
RIP...
Aug 21, 2015 -
Re: ¡Spirit Subaru!
Hey, this one actually kinda made sense! Great job, man.
Aug 21, 2015 -
Re: Absolute - Chapter 1
Remind me to read this until I do.
Aug 18, 2015 -
Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 4 (Ribbits and Rain)
*grins evilly* Go on... The next chapter waits.
Aug 5, 2015 -
Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 3 (Less-Goods on Terra)
Haha, no problem. :p
Aug 5, 2015