Harrug

Alright, I have gone back through the original piece and I've done a pretty good deal of editing. Please tell me what you think, and any suggestions you have for ...

I've almost finished the editing, just a little left to go. I might get it out in several hours at the most.

Well, your off to a good start! I'll be glad to review when your completely done with this piece.

Wow, thank you so much for the insight! Time to go back and edit it a bit!

I feel like this poem is ironic about not being able to write, and yet you write a poem that is WAY better than I could write (and I've been ...