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Wow! :) Beautiful.

I'll have to rewrite. :lol: Thank you very much for your comments which I can see have a lot of truth. I suppose my writing is a little stiff. I ...

Sorry doll. ^_^ Can we kiss and make up? *kisses*

Claudette, was there ANYTHING AT ALL that you liked about my story?

Wow, I thought my worth as a writer was decent but now I'll have to rethink that along with the whole of my story. Oh well. :lol: I guess this ...

I suppose I was just rambling. XD

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I don't think anyone should have to explain what they've written. Don't you agree? That's why I hate criticism that isn't based on grammer or spelling issues. I see the ...

I suppose I can't please everyone. ;) *sighs*

I'm glad you liked it! :D Thank you very much for your praise, it is always welcomed! ;) Self pity, eh? I don't know if I was aiming for that ...