HarpoMarx

Good. I just changed a few things they are highlighted in red. One hand rested on the wheel, the other on my bound hands. He kept glancing into my eyes, ...

GREAT WORK just have a look at some of the changes I think should go in. “ Crazy ” Elisa spits the word like its some foul, disgusting thing of ...

Gavin squinted through the stampede of shoes, “Don’t think it’s nothin’. Prob’ly just a milk bottle cap,” he muttered. The two boys were sitting on the old wooden fence. They ...

006. Blind ‘You don’t… look blind.’ ‘Half-blind,’ I snapped , ‘What’s a half-blind s’posed to look like, anyway? Hobbling around on a stick and begging?’ Rat wrinkled up his nose ...

"Slut!" they scream from behind her back as she hurries down the hallway with quivering legs. Filthy stares penetrate her clothes as she tries to escape those groping hands. Just ...

Good Job. See the thing I have hi-lighted red, I am a bit confused about the punctuation use. Wonders of the world flash and flaunt. Impossible dreams urge and taunt. ...

great work darling! Just have a look at some of my corrections in red and tell me what you think. You're always wearing a mask afraid to show the world ...

I miss her eyes. Her beautiful, golden eyes. They were a colour i ' d never seen before. It was a warm loving colour, just like her. I remember her ...

My room was small and cold. It was made of nothing but cement, except for the old, weak cot, and the even weaker end table in the corner. The cloth ...

Yes, I really should have listened to Alexandra. Alexandra was my best friend since the third grade. She was bossy, annoying, arrogant and had a huge ego...basically she was a ...

Good work. All my corrections are in red. "James?" Said Alexandra , "Do you have any idea where we ' re going?" "I really don't know but i think this ...

"I’ll never get used to this bloody weather!” Andinus sighed rubbing his hands together trying to build up some heat . should be a comma “Out of all the places ...

The Celts were all at the top of the palisade, banging their shields with their weapons and shouting their war cries hoping to intimidate the Romans. It was working. “Draw ...

Hi there! Great work! Just one tiny little thing: “You must be careful, Gamel!” exclaimed one of the archers. “That would have been a nasty fall. We cannot loose our ...

good work darling! I've put all my corrections in purple and any punctuation things in red. November 1, 1989 East Berlin I doubt you will ever read this, but I ...