HappyEMU

Thanks for reviewing! I hope it was fun for you. I'm glad you liked my story. Honestly I wasn't sure what I was trying to do with this story. I ...

Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad that I was able to capture something you could relate to:)

Hello There! Thank you so much for sharing your story! Overall I really liked this. I think it was a great opening and did a good job showing your readers ...

Hi! I really liked this a lot. It has some very strong imagery and interesting lines. I only have a few suggestions of things that you might want to change ...

This was so beautiful! I love the imagery and the tone! Great job!

Thank you for reading! This helps a lot. I have a bad habit of drawing out my paragraphs. I'm glad that you got a good read on the girls personalities. ...

Hi! This was a very interesting and unique read for me. Please take everything I say with a grain of salt. I'm no expert, and this is my first day ...