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Thank you!

Thank you!

Oh I see. I'm not really sure how to format it since this is my first piece of work. I was trying to make the indents to show that it ...

I wanted to make it seem like even at a young age and throughout the rest of her life, the main character's parents have always controlled what she does and ...

Thank you, but I am not sure what you mean by "stepped some place up before starting each line." Can you clarify?

The plot of the story seems interesting. I would be interested to read more. However, it would definitely help to have some context because when reading this excerpt, I have ...