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  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: iso the i

    Interesting little poem. Would be funny if 10+ years in the future, scientists found out this was true in any way. The only thing that I would say to improve ...

    Jun 28, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Self-Portrait

    I like it, it's a nicely written creative poem. I am always of the thought that writing about being happy is hard, while writing about being sad is easy. But ...

    Jun 28, 2025
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: Diagnosis 2

    So, a very powerful poem. Feels like a talk to oneself? It's nicely written and well formatted. What I don't like/think that could be improved on. Is there's sometimes too ...

    Jun 11, 2025


Should we not walk? On our feet? The ones I now have again? I do like my feet. They are befittingly perambulatory.
— Pattern (Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanderson)