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Re: Into the Sea
To everyone reviewing, please ignore the typos! There are a couple through out, I was so excited to posts I didn't give it the full attention it obviously needed. Anyway ...
Jun 1, 2015 -
Re: I'm Like This Mug.
Thank you for the review! Your words have brought some light to my sunday!
Jun 1, 2015 -
Re: A Paper bag and a Sign...
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Jun 1, 2015
This is a interesting piece, the way a person views themselves and how they think others might view them is an interesting topic. An idea I had while reading this ... -
Re: A Paper bag and a Sign...
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Jun 1, 2015
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Jun 1, 2015
This is a interesting piece, the way a person views themselves and how they think others might view them is an interesting topic. An idea I had while reading this ... -
Re: A Tribute to Charlie.
First off here are some technical things that I thought were worth fixing. "His palms which were coated in sweat tried to grasp a gold picture frame that hang off ...
Jun 1, 2015 -
Re: I'm Like This Mug.
Thank you, your critique and advice is so helpful. I struggled with the part "as I drink my coffee." because I felt like it still had a place there but ...
May 30, 2015 -
Re: I'm Like This Mug.
Thank you for your encouraging words, I really appreciate your taking the time to read my piece.
May 30, 2015