Hannah

No, thank YOU~

Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts, marmalade. Glad you enjoyed and got some thoughts from it. :)

Znale, thanks so much for your review. It has given me some things to think about in terms of the solidity of this poem. I am not sure if you ...

Oh, are you looking for line and grammar edits?

It's not so much as you would be seen as a bad person -- whoever reads your book might enjoy the story if they aren't aware of the social climate ...

Oops! I just read that section wrong, about the Friday. I missed the transition where it said "only to take the bus that went the opposite way", so I thought ...

No problem! I'm glad I could help a bit! :)

I guess my point is that when you publish a poem, you don't get the chance to go in and explain the allusions of the poem or the main message ...

I hope the explanation of all that was useful to you! It is fine to have your own intentions in writing and crafting a poem. Just remember that the audience ...

Okay, this it not a review yet, but I am so glad that you shared this piece. I remember struggling a lot with being able to have sex for the ...

It's not my place to suggest fundamental changes to your poem. If you don't agree with me, then don't worry about it, and if you do, then you have to ...

Yeah, because it would require accepting the poem and reflecting on your own experience before I could get to that theme. I'm just saying it's a risk, and I think ...

Haha, probably not just because we need to get hooked into the poem and accept the poem before we're going to find any meaning in it, and with a poem ...

This is an awesome review.