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Re: My 2 Sentence Horror Stories
Hi there, Kara. You mention you've changed up this piece quite a lot, so I'm here to take a look at it, although I don't know what it looked like ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 3
Hey there! Here as requested! :) So I have no idea who these characters are, and this is my first time getting to know them, which I actually kind of ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Unstoppable -- Chapter 8
And here we are! In the latest installment. I see that this is for LMS so there will be more to come, right? Let me know when you post another ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Unstoppable -- Chapter 7
Hey hey, back again~ I wonder -- do you work in editing? Because there have been a couple scenes that get deep into B doing his editing work, like the ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Unstoppable -- Chapter 6
And here we are for chapter 6! I appreciate the description of the situation with his binder, although I think maybe you could take a look at it once more ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Unstoppable -- Chapter 5
And here we are! To the poor pieces of this story that have only gotten single reviews. Here to change that, I've read through all the previous chapters, haha. Let's ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Unstoppable -- Chapter 4
Here I am! What? I thought he found out about the attack while at work. Why wouldn't Reiner know and have to say that he "saw the news"? And what? ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Unstoppable -- Chapter 3
Yes, I'm back, back, back. Back again~ So at some point I realize I'm just reading about this guy doing his typing on the computer. I know the moment when ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Unstoppable -- Chapter 2
Here I am! So, I just finished the first scene, and I think you probably could have stuffed that at the end of chapter one? But I think that would ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Unstoppable -- Chapter 1
Hey there, ChiravianSkies! You're on my review day team, eh? Well, I'm here starting from chapter 1 to do my best to get all your recent chapters out of the ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: family portrait
Uh, girl, this poem starts out way too tame for the depths it goes to in later stanzas. I'm like "oh, a nice poem about family" and then "hey, wait, ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Insanity, Yugiyoh, and Breaking Up... Adventures in Discovering Myself.
Mavis, I read "Love is Bipolar" either yesterday or the day before and just loved it so much, even though I didn't prove it by leaving a comment or review. ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Swelter Rest
Aleta, Yus. I am in love with what I now realize is your style -- taking those words and making them mean something they've never meant before. Swelter Rest? That's ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: 344 Days of Ash
Um. Um. Um, HI, Victoria, so I just read your prologue and EXCUSE ME, how much do I want to keep reading and know why these flowers would suddenly stop. ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Gardens of Eden (3rd Improvement)
Hi there, RavenBlack. This is my first time taking a look at your work, though it seems you've taken a few look at it yourself! This was me a year ...
Apr 30, 2017
