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Hey, Felisca! It feels like this piece isn't finished yet~ If you're wondering how to edit it to add more, on the right side of the page under your avatar ...

Ohh, I always like the trickiness and delicacy of a villanelle, and I think you worked through that tricky form and came out with a genuine meaning, which is like ...

I think the biggest strength of this piece is that it portrays so specifically a strong, emotional regret without explicitly stating that regret or confusion of emotion. It's also not ...

Hey! I wanted to say that your author's note was the main thing that made me able to make sense of this poem.Without it, it wouldn't have had the same ...

Haha, I can definitely feel the idea. I like the physical details you include, the descriptions of the location. I like especially the car parks out the window because mentioning ...

My love. I like the simple thought behind this. I like that the brevity of it evokes the quiet that it talks about -- that kind of poem that just ...

Hey, Iggmonster. Combing through on my first read-through, I found these: My eyes roamed over the golden highlights in her brown hair and how they glowed in the florescent lights, ...

Heyo~ I am popping in and leaving some comments. Hope they will be helpful, but feel free to ignore them if they are not! Here are some things I thought ...

Hi, dreamgurll! Here to review and hopefully be helpful. First time through, I'm just going to react to what I'm reading as I go along! :) The first thing I ...

I won't lie. Capitalizing the first letter of every line always makes me thing it's an acrostic poem. Thank you, Laure, for telling me this deep message: ILAIASIIIOIATAIILWH. Hahaha. Okay, ...

Hey there, astutedude! Hopefully my review will be helpful to you. The first thing I want to say is that I like the couplet (two line) rhyming. Even though the ...

Hey there, Black! The third of your promised reviews from the KotGR contest has, at long last, arrived! I want to start out by saying there are some places where ...

Okay! So here's the third review you were promised from your loyal company, the Knights of the Green Room. You know I worked through most of this as the longer ...

So! For your third review from the Knights of the Green Room, I'd like to take a look at the organizational structure of this piece. I will say right away ...

Hey, Blackwood. Figured I needed to read your serial while I was at it. Some things I noticed! Who would give flowers to one who had died (on my terms ...