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Ooooh, a nice spooky introduction to a scary new world. Lemme see if any of my thoughts will be helpful to you when you work to edit this to perfection! ...

Hey there, Knight Aurora! I figure it's time that I pay you back a bit for all the good work that you've put into review with the After Watch. So ...

Hey, RoxieRain! I know that you mentioned that this is personal so you're not looking for criticisms, but the whole point of YWS is to get reviews and suggestions on ...

Hey there! I am popping in at chapter six without having read any of the previous story. I think this can be useful to let you know how clear the ...

Hello, there! I have to say that you got that wide spread storyteller voice down very well in the first few paragraphs. That idea of "this is a timeless story ...

Hey again, Rhia! It's a little strange to come directly from so vivid a poem as your "Signs of Summer" into a poem that promises almost the same with the ...

Haha, that was such a weird opening. At first I thought it was real wizards fighting, and I was like, ummm... what wizard talks about earning EXP? That's only in ...

I'm here, dark! I'm here! And here right on time! Haha~ My suspicion lessened. "Oh alright." I smiled. What? What!?! Ryan is the guy who like ALWAYS knows what's going ...

Ahhh. A sonnet. A poem squeezed into a form. I have to say, I didn't actually realize you were fitting in a form during the first four lines, and ma'am, ...

Oh god, this poem is absolutely dripping with Summer. I have to say right away that the stanza beginning with storms is absolutely perfectly strong, balanced, and rich, and you ...

Hey, Pinkiegirl! I was sad to see that you didn't feel like you could join us on review day. I hope that you continue learning about reviewing and soon feel ...

Hey there!! First of all, I just have to say this because it's usually really helpful toward getting more reviews: break up your work into smaller pieces. When an average ...

Hello again~ I have to say that this chapter was a million times more genuine, subtle, believable, and touching than the last. This felt real. This felt completely real and ...

Hey, Willow! I've read about Belinda before, and I thought this was the next chapter... did you write a different story about Belinda and I'm hopping into a "different perspective" ...

Hey there, friend. I just wanted to stop by quickly to let you know that the idea of a concept series is totally do-able and has been published before. This ...