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Re: Dark Elves- back cover
Hello! I'm Hannah. C: This was really short. o_O; Was there supposed to be more on it? In any case, I really don't think this is very good as a ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: When Matching Outfits Were My Biggest Problem
^_^ Hello! I'm Hannah! ^_^ Here are my first impressions~ After reading this through one time, I was left slightly unsatisfied. It seemed that in the second-to-last paragraph you had ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: My Shame
;=; You should never say that about your own work! Okay, I mean, if you put absolutely no work in it and don't care about it at all, then it ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Eulogy
Moomars! It's writing! Omgoshness!! ^_^ Haha, so I have to tell you that while I was reading this poem, I was in a singing mood and ended up reading it ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 1 of what I hope to be a novel
^_^ Hello! I'm Hannah! I saw this piece and decided to give you a little review of it. C: Welcome to YWS, by the way! After reading it through once, ...
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: where i'm from
Hello! I'm wondering if this was an assignment for a class or something? >_< I hope it is, because it's /super/ similar to 'Where I'm From' by George Ella Lyon! ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Prototype World
Hallo! ^_^ I'm Hannah! I'm no expert on constructing poetry, but I like reading it, so I'm going to give you the opinion of a reader. xDDD Hehehe~ First of ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Among the Infidels (1)
^_^ Hi, Sam! I'm Hannah! I saw this work on the front page and I felt like seeing some of your writing. C: I have to say, this was BEAUTIFUL! ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: song for society
^_^ Hello, Lexi! I /really/ like this poem. I appreciate the way you change up the form sometimes, too! It sort of adds to the ever-changing mosaic of what is ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: China Doll
I like this poem! I think that there are some things you can change about it though. ^_^ For example; I hit the ground Then you walked away. I don't ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Into the Giant's Land
^_^ Hallo there! >_< I accidentally read the spoiler before reading the whole thing, so that kind of ruined it for me. I mean, the story wasn't ruined, but I ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Emma Hereford, Prologue
^_^ -waves- Hello, I'm Hannah~ Might I provide a few comments? ^_^ After reading this short bit through ONCE, I sort of like the premise of the story, but I ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: My Friend Robert
Hi, name twin! ^_^ I promised I'd be around to review some MORE of your work, so here I am! I think if you want more reviews you should definitely ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Watermelon Rinds
Ohhh, Evi. ;=; The poor ants. ;=; See, usually I don't care about ants, but I think it helped that the poor little girl stole my name and made me ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Dusting Off Angels
HO. LY. CRAP, Evi. Like, seriously? Absolutely amazing. I super love this little piece, with all of my heart. That opening line, the way it was all tied together and ...
Feb 1, 2009
