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Re: Bound for Glory: Part two (Title change in works)
This is the best story you've posted on this site! Very entertaining. Their are only two things I would change. First, there is a typo. It's in there somewhere and ...
Nov 11, 2005 -
Re: Writing challenge 10/17 "Momentary"
This is a style of poem that I never did understand. But I suppose I don't have to. I mean, not everyone is going to "get" everything... I guess what ...
Oct 22, 2005 -
Re: REDEMPTION (i need comments to improve it)
I agree with Sam. Your story is good but its downfall is that the situation is to vague. I think that you might do well to beef up what you ...
Oct 20, 2005 -
Re: A Perfect World
Your story and descriptions are very imaginative. The only thing I would suggest changing is the way the spirit spoke. The way she said a few things seemed a little ...
Oct 19, 2005 -
Re: "Portraits" I can't fix it if no one comments on i
In all honesty, I didn't like the story much, but I felt it was very well written. One of the things I like is the way you let the reader ...
Oct 17, 2005 -
Re: Something's Rotten (An All Hallows Eve Poem)
You make pumpkin carving seem more like cold blooded murder. Personally, carving pumpkins has always been one of my favorite parts of Halloween. But this isn't about me this is ...
Oct 17, 2005