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Re: Salt#1 (part one)
Hahaha well YAY for you writing again! Also I won’t “rip” it apart but I will make comments if that is okay... My fingers easily sliced through the warm sand. ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: SOCOM Black
Almost on cue, the wind dove past him, giving the sensations of cutting into his skin, and caught up the smoke. Okay it should be, “giving the sensation”, the sentence ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: I Know
*takes a deep breath* wow, that was very well done. I am a big fan of Death Note, having watched all the Anime and read the Manga. And you did... ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: Dragon Slayer's Son Part 1
Yay for Editing! Okay so most of this IS my oppinion so you can take it or leave it! The stuff in bold is stuff I want to draw your ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: The Place
Okay, this was deffinetly one of the most unique things I have ever read. I read the whole thing, mostly trying to figure out what was going on. Like most ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: A Redwall FanFic
Good, job, I used to be addicted to all the Red Wall books. And for only being eleven you are doing a great job. I agree with some of the ...
Dec 2, 2008