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I really like it.I like the feeling it gives and how it can be easily imagined.However,I think it needs more rhyming.Very nice though.:)

The idea and the way it felt made me feel like I was there.It's very nice but the rhyming needs some fixing.I'm glad you're not depressed.:)

Amazing,absolutely amazing.I like your view of the world.I guess that's something we share.Keep up the good work.:)

love it!:D

Very nice.I love it.I really like the meaning and the way you say it makes me live it.:)

Thanks guys,I'm glad you liked it.I'll make sure I improve the way it looks.Honestly this is the first poem I've ever wrote and you guys really encouraged me.Thanks.:)