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Re: Oren ~Two~
Chappiez, As I have not read the first part, i didn't understand what was going on at first, but I quickly caught on. I thought you did a fantastic job ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Chapter Two!
fandomsNmusic, This chapter is amazing! It is very well written, especially for a 13 year old. I did not notice any grammar or punctuation errors, though I may have passed ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Warrior Cat FF *Chp. 1*
Great job Gymnast2801! You did a very good job. But, there were a few little things that need to be fixed. "You where put into this world for a reason." ...
May 27, 2016