GuyLathamzim

Any thoughts on the new draft?

Any opinion on the new draft?

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Not so sure how to Review such a piece. Grammatically, its flawless. so I will keep it short and sweet. Firstly, the content is something that I definitely related to. ...

Thanks a lot for the review. You raised many issues that I had over looked. However, I spat it out in under an hour and so I knew there would ...

Thanks for the advice. I shall definitely take those thoughts on board when I redraft it. Its a plot that really does have so many factors, both mental and physical, ...

Thanks for the review. I appreciate whatever feedback I can get. The reason I spell many of those words with a 's' is because I tend to lean towards the ...

Wonderful vocab, structure and depth. Perhaps one of the best shorts I've come across on this site. The graphic nature and the calm collective assertiveness of the protagonist goes a ...