GryphonFledgling

Wait a second. What do you mean by "novel adaptation"? Are you adapting from the novel or are you writing your own novel that is an adaptation? Because if it ...

The Prof did a smashing job of reviewing up there. I don't know how I'm going to follow that. 'K, first (I'm working under the assumption that this is a ...

Hmm... I liked this, but I was also confused. What exactly was it that these two girls were doing? How old are they? I had the impression early on in ...

Seriously, I'm with Demeter. What do you mean "not that scary"?! Geez, this was the scariest one! The mood was so much creepier in this one. The other two were ...

Ooh, very nice. Scary stuff is developing here. 'K, this one was much better than the first by way of characterization, but at the same time, it felt really rushed. ...

Hello there... I've seen this around many times but was always doing something else at that moment and so couldn't be spared, then I would forget. But now, I have ...

Ha, I didn't even realize how long it was until near the end, when I happened to glance at the scroll bar. It sucked me right in. This reminds me ...

Aw, see? You can be a hardened criminal and still love fluffy animals! ;) Anyway, actual review time. I liked this, since we get to see that she isn't a ...

This was an interesting beginning. I liked the descriptions you had and you set up an intriguing situation. We don't know much about the boy, however, so we aren't inclined ...

Ugh, geez. I was totally not expecting it to play out like that. (it comes of ignoring ratings, I suppose.) It was horribly graphic and sickening, yet totally absorbing. I ...

Interesting hook, but did you have to end it so soon!? I'm interested! So what happens next? Yeah, that'd be my main gripe with this piece, in that it was ...

This was really sad and extremely powerful. It was interesting how you had two characters but only one actor. I could see it working on screen in order to make ...

Wow, I don't know how to follow a review like those of everyone else above me. I disagree with clograbby on one point: (also, mom shouldn't be capitilized. When used ...

Ooh. Someone's a bit of a nut job. *eyes Marshal warily* He's going to snap any time. Very nice stuff here. The only thing I found to comment was that ...

Ha. This was hysterical. I agree that it was a little rough (definitely go ahead with that polishing you say you are going to do - it can only get ...