GryphonFledgling

'Allo, 'allo, I am back to review once again. Seems my comment about the parentheses in my first review was unneeded. The parentheses do indeed seem to become a device ...

Hey hi! I've been meaning to review this as the newer chapters have come out, so this is me starting from the beginning. It seems like everyone else covered this ...

Oooh, I likes this. My major criticism would be the discrepancy between the character's narrating voice and the character's actual speaking voice. Her narration sounds rather erudite and educated, whi

Ooh! Greek myth retellings! Shiny. I don't believe I felt remorse when my mother told us. How could we when our first memories were of cold stone, harsh words, and ...

Well now... Part Two. To be honest, this didn't sit so well with me as much as the first part did. That said, it is still wonderful It just seems ...

In the same boat as lilymoore there: saw part two and figured I might as well do it justice by reading part one. *blink* This was... lovely. The inter-cutting of ...

Hey hi! I'm GryphonFledgling and I'll be your reviewer today. Elena sat on a floor of what looked and smelled like some rusty old prison. I know what you mean ...

Your writing is really solid grammatically and I like the whole idea you are setting up, but this sort of feels like a summary of the action rather than the ...

I gets to read a bit of Shrive ? *squee* A lot of people have already put their thoughts to this, so I'll try and stay fresh with stuff I ...

unable to speak as he address’ me "Addresses"? I hated it when guys went easy, that’s why I liked to fight Kevin. I liked fighting Nicholas too but he was ...

This was beautiful. Depressing as all get out, but so beautiful. The rundown of the impact in slow motion was especially wonderful, in a chilling and sobering way. Your style ...

I loved how your Cinderella is suffering from a hangover through the whole thing (magic or alcohol induced?), rather than being a radiant ball of sunshine. It just makes the ...

This is interesting... The idea of the girl fighter is something I haven't seen done a lot, and especially not one who still aware of her femininity. I'm excited just ...

This was interesting. I liked the idea behind it. My question is what exactly the Devil needs souls to do chores or homework for. I mean, isn't s/he, like, the ...

Lulz. I still haven't gotten over the chuckles this series has given me. I love the "dood" spelling in Dooku's screenname. For some reason, the idea of Christopher Lee using ...