GryphonFledgling

Hey hi! The mood in the beginning confused me just a smidge. Take a deep breath and I calm my racing heart. What time is it? It's 6:52 and I ...

Hey hi! I haven't read the other chapters here, but this intrigued me, so I figured I'd have a go at it. I won't comment on the story too much, ...

'allo, 'allo, part deux for the win! While I seriously laughed out loud at how easy it was to get rid of the threat of the wizard (for real, loved ...

Hey hi! First off, I like the idea of royalty having anxieties about being royalty. And interestingly enough, we're starting out with the queen being the queen, rather than some ...

Hey there! What can I say? I loved this. The wryness of the whole thing was incredibly funny. I can see where some people are coming from in the lack ...

Hello hi! Why exactly is the war referred to as "Moby Dick"? It seems like there should be an interesting reason behind it, but why exactly? What was the reasoning ...

Hey hi! This felt very much like an old classic detective story in terms of how it played out. The situation was set up, the clues were found, the investigator ...

Hello hi! Just going to go for the quick-n-dirty review, so I won't nitpick all that much. Just general impressions. I liked Cassie's devotion to her family. Too often, a ...

I loved how this sort of jumped and skipped its way through. The little snatches were more powerful than a big long paragraph waxing poetic would have been. I like ...

Hey oh! I like your title. It drew me in and made me click. The setting here intrigues me. Is it something like post-apocalyptic? So far in the future that ...

(aside from a new project...ish...buuut that's for Part 3 to cover. xD >> *sweatdrops* I didn't say anything! ^^; ) Say whaaa? *excited bouncing* He nods obediently—gracing me with the ...

Hey oh! I come bringing a review! Children shove small tennis shoes in yellow cubbies against the wall, shriek with laughter as their stockinged feet chase each other across the ...

I love your character's attitude. Sassy, but not too much so that it becomes annoying. A very nice balance. I liked the way you sort of eased into it all. ...

Hey there! This is a nice little vignette, but I kind of wish it had a little bit more. As is, it kind of comes across a little... whiny? I ...

and there, by the road, is the sign that tells exactly how far away humanity is Favorite excerpt, right there. I'm not much of a poetry writer, so this is ...