GryphonFledgling

Hey ya, hunky-bun! Love, love, love. I will say right off that I noticed quite a few typos. I'm not going to go through and find them again because I ...

Hey oh! as I trotted to her rooms. Slightly nitpicky, but you used the term "trotting" just a few lines beforehand. It's just uncommon enough of a word choice that ...

Why hello there... See, this is where a bit more of the exploration behind why he is so hung up on Lenore would have been nice (also, bee tee dubs, ...

Hey yo! GryphonFledgling here, reporting for reviewing duty! First off, I just wanna say that I love your title. I don't really know why. It just rolls off the tongue ...

Oooh, another chapter! *noms* ‘Is she worth going against the law and the church? Mmm, this whole conversation that followed about morals felt kind of dumpy. I know that in ...

Baaaack. ‘Are you out of your mind?’ I demanded. I love that all of his reasons are purely practical, as opposed to any sort of moral objection. ‘You are young, ...

Hello-hi! Sorry it took me so doggone long to get around to this bad boy. Justine looked up and met my gaze. She blushed, smiling. ‘Sir?’ ‘The shadows seem to ...

All righty now... Ready for the big Nine-Double-Goose-Egg? I wondered if this was how souls felt, waiting for judgment after death. Only, instead of Fate deciding, it was my parents. ...

'allo, 'allo! I am GryphonFledgling, here to review zees work of yours! He wasn’t going to do anything to me anyway. If he was, he would have by now. Erm, ...

Hey-oh! I've been meaning to review this for aaaaaages (geez, I remember when you first started talking about this project) and I'm finally getting around to it. Yay? I always ...

Mary nodded, not blinking away tears; Sara couldn't see it anyway. This line. This line cut me to the quick. I was reading through, forming my critique of the overly ...

Hey you! Sorry it took me so long to get around to reviewing this. It's been on my "to do" list for forever, it seems. So here I go! Gonna ...

Hey-hi! Gryph here for reviewing! The atmosphere created was really, really nice. Not a whole lot happened in this story, but the weight of the story was still felt. I ...

Hello hello hello... made c rinkles appear under his eyes. This chapter felt like it flowed a lot better. I wasn't being zoomed from one spot of information to the ...

Hello! I'm back for another chapter! Drinmeeca could feel his sadness and concern for her, but she did not want anything to do with this man. Why not? He's a ...