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Re: Coffee Stains
Wow! This is great! I loved how the ending tied in with the begining of the story. It was such a perfect close. I've read countless stories where the endings ...
Aug 13, 2012 -
Re: The House on Mango Street
Beautiful! I don't have a single criticism. It was just beautiful!
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Deliver Us From Evil
Wow. That's really deep. I don't think it's depressing per-say, but I think it's heartbreaking. Something this true, with this kind of emotion can hardly be critiqued.
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Could It Be...
Beautiful! Absolutley beautiful! Your poem has such a deep, strong message that I got it immediatley (which is rare with me and poetry). I love it! I can't find anything ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Rainy Recollections
Very nicley done! I don't have anything bad to say. I loved it!
Aug 2, 2011