GrinningMan

You know, I didn't notice most of the issues in this one until now, since I wrote it pretty late at night on a sleep-drunk brain. I can't believe I ...

Whoops, wrong button.

Thanks for the review. So far I'm just trying to get a hold of the main idea; hopefully so it's more coherent and a little more fresh once I start ...

Sorry for getting a reply to you late, but I do appreciate the kind words. This whole thing is stemming from an obsession of mine that I've been enjoying lately. ...

Thanks a lot for the review, I try my best to pick out grammatical errors and whatnot, I just am not a fan of editing my own works. It's like ...

No prob, been a while.

Thanks a lot, I appreciate the insight.

Thanks. I appreciate the review and it made me feel better, despite this cold and he way my body thinks it's dying. The second part may be delayed, but at ...

Thanks for the help, but honestly I don't edit as much because it's a majorly time consuming task. That and trying to split up things into parts would require a ...

I would break it up a little more, but that would require a complex system of something along the lines, like, "Chapter 1 Part 1" I just don't really want ...

An enjoyable experience. I love how you've made the imagery, but honestly, if the topic didn't freak me out so much I'd enjoy it more. (Trust me, I love this, ...

I appreciate the review, so, thanks for that. Grammar has never really been too much of a simple thing for me, I always seem to miss something somewhere or a ...

Thanks. I thought I'd have a lot more errors but it seems to be better than my last attempt. I still have the older generation I scrapped. But, seeing as ...