GrimRipper

This is just amazing, the depth of the character and the truth that hides in it. How cruel people can be to the weaker, it is probably what will happen ...

thanks for the reviews. I'll try to do better with the next chapters. about the confusion with the situation, well, the story is based on the situation in Israel, where ...

the story is good, very good as a story, but not exactly fast pace action, more like a thriller. but we'll, maybe it will turn to an action story. Anyhow, ...

This is simply amazing, so deep yet not too hard to understand. Things like this makes me start thinking for myself. Thank you for such an awesome poem!!!