GrimRipper

This is beautiful! Shorter than the other chapters but it is actually good, I feel myself sympathizing with Mark (both about the agony over the incident and also with the ...

well, its quite good, having a good description of the character's feelings. There was just one part that I didn't understand, but maybe its just my bad English, it was ...

Amazing as the one before him. The story is getting clearer, I guess by the ending that she has an ability that she doesn't like. which gives a whole new ...

Overall, liked it very much, especially the short conversation with his mom, it was the thing that touched me in this story. What I didn't like is that the guy ...

Liked it very much. the cold environment and it's description sort of preparing the reader to the Her thoughts scattered as the sound of heavy footsteps close behind her. Terrified, ...

Really liked it, especially the description of the environment and how it connects so well with the place. I feel so bad with myself for reading the spoiler because now ...