Griffinkeeper

This poem tries to accomplish... something. I'm not sure what, which means you really lost track of it.

Because Aerospace Air Corps sounds so much cooler! It sounded repetitive to me. Whoa. So that is what people mean by info-dump. Hmm. Any suggestions on how I could change ...

1400 Hours April 9th, 2008 SPEW Gryphon II In Transit "We're approaching the source of the transmission," Adelaide said. "All hands to battle stations," Grif said calmly. At the various ...

0900 Hours April 9th, 2008 SPEW Gryphon II In Transit There were at least fifty people on the Gryphon, which is fourty-nine more than Grif was used to. Despite the ...

2200 Hours April 7th, 2008 SPEW Gryphon II In Transit PenguinAttack woke up and looked around. The room was barren, except for the bunk. She jumped down from the top, ...

this story was so weird as i read it seemed like everything was just he was the only human on bored and blaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa blaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb

1100 Hours April 7th, 2008 YWS Station YWS System "Incan and the medical detachment have finished boarding," Adelaide said. "Very well. Ask docking control for permission to embark." "I've got ...

0945 Hours April 7th, 2008 SPEW Shipyards YWS System The SPEW Gryphon II activated its thrusters. It's pink bow cleared the shipyards. Inside, Grif stood and watched the YWS Station ...

0800 Hours April 7th, 2008 SPEW Shipyards YWS System It had been a long time since Grif had been involved in any mission of consequence, so he hadn't had to ...

1300 Hours April 5th, 2008 YWS Station- Distinguished Member Quarters YWS System Grif lay face down in bed, asleep. Adelaide flickered on. She looked around at the room. "What a ...

0900 Hours April 2nd, 2008 YWS Station- Big Brother Interview Chamber YWS System "Near... far... whereEVER you are!!" the member sang. Grif plugged his ears and the other two judges ...

1900 Hours April 1st, 2008 YWS Station- Captain's Lounge YWS System Grif showed up punctually. The lounge was as it always was; dark and full of memory. There were pieces ...

I like this. Some parts of it were long winded and could be reduced, but it was well written nonetheless. It reminded me a lot of "1001 Arabian Nights" in ...

You should read the sticky about how to format a script. This is more like a blog post gone wrong than a script. Also, there are many format errors, for ...

Doesn't this belong in fan-fiction?