GreyMatter

Thanks for the note at the end. I have written an acrostic poem earlier but didn't know it was actually a thing.

Looking forward to chapter 2. Everything can be expanded/edited later but keep the story flowing. Do the rings hold some magic? I'd like that. :)

A beautiful turned badass poem!

Needs more development.... I'll review it once you edit this draft.

Dear Radrook, you are always one of the first to review me. I had been waiting for your review. Your review was funny and thought-provoking. Clearly you got confused with ...

By the way, did you notice the ending changed? I have edited as per your suggestions.

Oh no! I did it again. Started with a but!

Thanks lelu. I am no writer. But the suggestions and corrections offered by people like yourself really help me to improve.

Yours is the best review I got till date. Thank You. I will take your suggestions.

*feeling

Thanks This poem just came to me when I was actually felling all that. And the title is what I thought at that moment. The whole business was done within ...

Thank you for reviewing my work once again. I'm glad you could relate (should I be?).

Sleep earlier. :)

I changed the last line. The light breeze that earlier threatened him now actually becomes the cause of his fall. I cut the unnecessary parts as pointed by you. I ...

Fair enough. It was the first draft and with your suggestions, I hope it does not disappoint.