GrenadeCatcher

Hahahaha:) Classy pretty much covered everything! That was very entertaining though, thank you!

Hahahaha! This was hilarious!!!!! I think you have a really good chance of winning the contest... I didn't see any errors! Is it under a thousand words? It seems a ...

Oh that's awesome! Thanks for the ideas:) I copy from my word document, so the italics go away and I just go through and re-highlight them.

Hi! Thanks, I think I'm going to make it something more unrealistic, kind of like a disease that can spread from person to person. It will give it a more ...

Why not try putting space on your next chapters, but good start. I write all of my things on Microsoft Word first then copy and paste them here, which automatically ...

Hello. Here as requested. I will be blunt and say I only read the first two paragraphs, plus a sentence. I didn't want the review to be too long. To ...

Thanks! For whatever reason when I typed this up my computer kept saying soul was wrong so I assumed it was sole haha

Hi! I'm happy to be your first reviewer! First of all, I noticed that you put a -- before each ''. That isn't necisary! It actually bugs me, but so ...

Thanks! I'll go through and expand some more, she did end her life and ended up in heaven. I can put a story in about how she commited suicide to ...

Ohhh I never thought of that! Thank you!