GreenTulip

Hi, if I am GreenTulip, but Tulip is the name. I am here to offer you a review. 1. Your poem isn't terrible, but it can be better. It's good ...

I am not a fan of Dr. Who, but I have a friend who is. I loved the story. It is well written. I saw barely any grammatical or sentence ...

This is interesting. I read about half of it, before skimming over the rest of it, because I am pressed on time right now. It is structurally sound with your ...

This is a good chapter. I enjoyed reading it, but tone down on some of the narrating of the rules, and focus on the characters that you have in the ...

Wow, this is good. Though I feel like the flow from them going to practice magic into the mess of people went by two fast. If you could tone it ...

Wow, this is a long chapter. I haven't read the other two chapters, but I will get to those in a while. This is well done, and some details were ...

Hi, GreenTulip here to give you a review. I have read your first chapter, but not the second one. But besides that point, I loved this chapter. Okay..I skimmed the ...

This is a good chapter, and it is making me want to read more. 1. The Main character is well developed from what I saw of her. You showed off ...

Wow. This is well done. :) I loved it. 1. This would typically be given to advice the writer of grammatical mistakes. But this time, I didn't see anything. 2. ...

Just as Adriana12Alexis says... Hey, I like the story. It could be a bit better though if you add more depth. The whole thing kind of seems too cardboard, too ...

this is well written, just with a few grammatical mistakes. Blues has pointed htem out in his/hr review. But I like the idea of the story. "Pull the trigger girl, ...

Hi, GreenTulip Here for a review. One of the people who have already review said something..and I agree. Not to be rude but the font is so small that I ...

I have not seen Frozen yet, and I may eventually see it. So I am reading this and I am pulled into the story. I have a few nit picks ...

This chapter is better, but you still need to work on some of the issues that i addressed in your first chapter. 1. Paragraph lengths should be cut down in ...

Hi, GreenTulip here to offer you a review. So, I liked the piece, it is original. I liked it. The piece was well written, but like any piece of work- ...