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Re: ..
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review on this piece. Nitpicks Punctuation. All you use in your poem is Commas. You can use periods in some places. If you ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: Foreign language in Poetry
Hi, Strange. GreenTulip here for a review on something I didn't even knew you had written till I was stalking....hmmmmm surfing the People's tab. I felt like this would be ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: Thrax
Hi, GreenTulip here for a review of "Thrax". So I typically don't read anything that is long, but I can make an exception here. I am speechless, but I have ...
Mar 4, 2014 -
Re: Nightmare
Hi, GreenTulip here to give you a review on your poem "Nightmares", on this early Monday morning. I must say I liked the poem, though I feel like it would ...
Mar 3, 2014 -
Re: Radioactive
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review on your short story. so I would like to say that the idea of the story was interesting. I liked it, and ...
Feb 27, 2014 -
Re: Do you see your life?
Hi, Tulip here to give you a review, as requested. First of all, I never review the same way every time I do a review, so don't feel bad for ...
Feb 27, 2014 -
Re: Claustrophobia
HI, GreenTulip here to give you a review. 1. I love how you set up this poem. It's message is clear and precise and it would have been lost in ...
Feb 24, 2014 -
Re: Review day story
Hi, GreenTulip here to give you a review as requested. I know that I shouldn't be so straightforward when I start a review off, but I don't follow by the ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Adventures with My Time-Traveling Uncle - Chapter Two
Hi, GreenTulip here to give you a review on this Review Day. I didn't think that I quite liked this chapter. It happened far to fast for my liking, and ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: The Graveyard
Hi, GreenTulip here for a review on this Review Day. I must say that I thought that this would be different when I first clicked on it. Even though it's ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Eye of the Slayer- Chapters 2-4
Herro! I know that you barely ever check the website now, as you have reason not to. But I feel like leaving you a review on this. I mean, it's ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Prologue+Chapter One
Herro! I know that you barely ever check the website now, as you have reason not to. But I feel like leaving you a review on this. I mean, it's ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Remembering my Resurrection - Chapter 2 – Beyond death, apparently
Hi, GreenTulip here to give you another review. I liked this chapter, a little more than the other one. 1. Split paragraphs up. If you change topics- change paragraphs. 2. ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Remembering my Resurrection - Chapter 1 – A Taste of life
Hi, GreenTulip here to give you a review. So this is interesting I can say at the most. I mean it is, but it wasn't interesting enough to keep my ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Butterfly! Part two..
Hi, GreenTulip here for a review. It is better than the first chapter, but it still needs work. Any work does. Please do not feel bad with me saying that. ...
Feb 23, 2014