GrayButterfly

Thanks :)

No worries! :)

Thank you so much for the feedback!! I'll definitley remember the advice. I've been wanting to write and post lately, but I've been so busy from school because all of ...

I would love to help you out with that, but I don't know how available I am with my schedule :/ is there some way i can contact you via ...

Thank you so much! That was indeed the style I was going for, and thanks for pointing out the comma stuff :D

Okay, so I'm back! *Show don't tell: "He chuckled evilly" remember show don't tell! What does an evil chuckle sound like? What makes it evil? "He smelled smoke, then laughed ...