Gravity

Awww. Thanks :)

I actually made some revisions and I think they made the poem a lot better.

@morticiansdaughter no problem :)

@TheMessenger @PeanutPheobe I revised stanza 3. Is it better?

Thanks. Yeah stanza three is a little awkward. Sorry :/

Thank you so much, and I'm sorry about that stanza. I would fix it... but I like the poem as is :p lol

Honestly, I don't count beats per line. I thought the rhythm was fine and I think everyone else did too...

I still don't get it. I'm sorry. Forget it. N'importe :)

Sorry, could you rephrase that? I didn't understand.

Thank you. I suppose I am. Are you making that statement based on the one poem or have you read my other work?

Basically, "The Ghost" is about the part of the brain that scares you. I can see where you would be getting confused with the mixed ideas, mainly with the "He's ...

@Kevikur, I thought you might like this.

I agree with the point about rhythm. I also want to point out the you should press shift-enter to drop down one line instead of two. If you are going ...

Sweet :)

So first, it's "This is a test." Saying basically "you're going to take a test now" and then "here is the test" meaning, the test is on your desk, you ...