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Well. Poems can focus on more than one thing. How often do you review poetry? The whole point of this is I am comparing myself to a cat, because I ...

thanks so much :) It really means a lot.

Awww thanks for the review :) GO TEAM RED!

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you found empathy with the narrator and I'm happy you liked my poem. Thanks for the review, you rock :)

I really appreciate your comments. I definitely love getting any tips I possibly can. I totally see where you're coming from with the thing about stanza 2. Thanks for the ...

This means so much to me. Thank you for your kind words :)

Nate you rock! Your bug thread is the only reason I haven't gone nuts. Thanks for being awesome :)

Thanks. And I like your profile. Yeah, I thought that without the rhyming it sounded more like a short story.

Thank you so much :)

With the use of rhyme scheme, I felt like unless you really went and lettered the lines, it wasn't noticeable. And with again and in they are a special kind ...

yup :)

Thanks. And it isn't rough any more because I did a mass edit which really helped. Thanks again :)

Thanks

I did a mass edit. Is this better?

Lol it's okay. Your review...hahahaha I'm dying! Omg you're hilarious. "THERE'S THE CAT AGAIN!" omg. Okay. I need...to....breathe. Okay. I can totally see where you're coming from. I wasn't incorporat