Gravity

Aw thanks! Now that I look back I see that you have reviewed and liked many of my works. Thanks so much, it's nice to know I have people who ...

Awww thnx.

Thanks so much for the review!!!!

You were right, each stanza change is supposed to signal a lapse of time. Tanks for the review.

Well, don't find a head in your locker and I'm sure you'll be alright :)

Thanks for this, I'm glad that you were able to relate to this poem, because I relate to it as well (which is kinda why a wrote it, lol.) Again, ...

Totes. Totally overthinking it. Lol the point was that the narrator stood up to the people doing her wrong (cough cough, moi) and because of that, she has the courage ...

Well thank you! Yeah this poem's tone wasn't supposed to be rich or beautiful or have rich flavors or be really... heavy. It's just one of those modern day "Dude, ...

I'm glad. So if you're a lot like Jack, are you gay? haha I had to ask

lol I'm sorry. Now I feel bad! This is the first story I wrote in the 3rd person POV, my other stuff is written in first person and is much ...

Thanks for your review. I understand completely where you're coming from, my character dimension is flat. This is mainly because this is the first story I've written in a third ...

Thanks! I have written other gore/horror stories and they have their own file in my portfolio if you'd like to check them out! :)

haha thanks for the review!

Thanks. Yeah, this is actually the shorter version. I apologize for the length.

Nice! Yeah I think that's something we should all do. Try something different, I mean.