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Aww that means a lot :)

Aww that means a lot :)

Thanks Lucy, I actually spotted many of the errors (like repetition) that you listed above, but wasn't sure how to fix them :)

Aww that means a lot :)

Aww that means a lot :)

Thanks Lucy, I actually spotted many of the errors (like repetition) that you listed above, but wasn't sure how to fix them :)

thanks

thanks :)

maybe. But I've been busy lately and I don't have enough points. Thanks though :p

yeah I understand. My first few chapters have not come out as well as I might have liked :p

Thanks :)

Beautiful. Too beautiful for me to ruin it by saying anything other than "beautiful".

Thank you for the critiques, I really appreciate it :)

First, you measure rhyme using letters. The stanza you're talking about with the messed up rhyme isn't actually messed up. The pencil and sword, (A) Will strike a new chord, ...

lmao