GrandmaMuffin

Thanks guys :)

Hia Just wanted to say it was awesome and I enjoyed reading it :D ~GMAmuffin~

It made me CRY!!!

oohhhhhhh. You should try em :D Found in AMERICA yahoo. They r like, cheese crackers shaped like fishes. They come in a bunch of flavors too. like pizza and motzerella ...

its all good:) and where do u live where Goldfish crackers don't exist? Lol

Hey when I said goldfish I ment goldfish crackers. You know the little orange fish? "The snack that smiles back"? And I might change it to a raven because I ...

well keekers, that was really good compared to my poem. XD maybe you should read it sometime to make you feel good about your writing. ;)

You sooooo much better than me at writing. That gives me motivation to write my third chapter. :) hopefully it won't suck too bad.

thanks ppl. :) ya I didn't like this chapter as much as the first either and I'm still working on the third. Iv actually written all the way up to ...

it was amazical. :D I love making up words don't you?

this poem was awesome and really deep. I really liked the beginning. good use of words :) keep up the good work

What everyone else in front of me said.

Ya i suck at grammar and all that. :P

awe SOME

I though it was funny and i agree with everyone else who commented:)