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Re: The Sun Has Set Again
Well written poem and work formatting stanzas. You did a great job by comparing the dead soldier to a sun. You were brilliant in continuing that comparison till last line. ...
Jun 5, 2017 -
Re: Zebras
Good job. Nice comparison by calling those who talk indiscriminately as predators. You touched my heart with "Dog eat...But still zebras.". The last stanza was inspiring. Congrats. keep doing such ...
Jun 5, 2017 -
Re: A hankering for gratitude
I like the rhyme scheme and the theme. Last line was the Ultimate Show Down!
Jun 5, 2017