Goldie_Locks

Well. Cute. All I can say ^^ You can't really review Haikus! ~Sarah

I agree with them, the syllables are a little messed up, but your message is clear. It's broken a little strangely, but it adds a twist! Keep up the work, ...

I like! It's simple, yet cunning. It's short, yet it seems to stretch out forever. It's a nice one...not new, but nice! Keep it up! ~Sarah

I agree with Esther and Snoink, it could use a little spicing up. It's nothing special, nothing new. But it was...er...pleasant. It was a fresh read. I think it could ...

Heya, Lumi! I didn't find anything other than what they said to be out of place. However, the last stanza is rather irrelevant and the poem would be much better ...

Well. I liked it, but as Vernon said, nothing special or new. It was impressive, though. I liked your flow, which was brilliant, and the massages in it. keep it ...

Wow. So descriptive, and it describes perfectly what we think dogs feel. I love the Personification, and at first I thought it was a child, but the tail-wagging tipped me ...

I agree, this is a rather scrambled, hard-to-read, and most of all different poem. It looks more like an essay than a poem, which hampers the way a reader looks ...