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Aloha! It's Aushy here, with my review, FINALLY. Sorry it took so long, I've been away. D: Nitpicks! “Would you like me to explain, or not,” I ask her, a ...

Hallo! It's me, Aushy, here for your review. :} Grammar I smiled, I didn’t need to look to see who it was. That comma should be a period or a ...

Aloha! :} Comments in red . Sinful Pride Chapter 1 Busy rice fields, disturbed water above the ground, birds calling each other and all this is looked at by an ...

Aloha buddy. :} So, this was very good! I did enjoy it! :} I only found one nitpick: Alec began to move forward across the roof, trying to shout to ...

Hallo. Here I am, going against myself once again, and reviewing things I haven't read the beginning of! Grammar “Nothing.” Jace said, “I merely hit the tree so I would ...

Hallo. :} Alright, let's get straight to the review, mkay? I thought it was odd that Elijah's mom left before Elijah could stay long. It was only, like, five minutes ...

Hallo! :} I'm Aushy, and I shall be reviewing your work today. Okay, first I have to say is, wow! Not only because I like your story, but because I've ...

Hallo there. :} I'm Aushy, nice to meet you. Yes, I am reviewing something that I haven't read the beginning of... I'm doing this a lot lately, I really need ...

Hallo. I'm Aushy, and welcome to YWS. :} I'm not much of a poet, so, let's see how I do with this! I did enjoy this a lot, but there ...

It's pretty good, but it's too early in the chapter to tell whether or not it has big potential. I say finish the chapter, post it up here, and let ...

Hay, it's Aushy! Remember me? :} Let's just fix up some mistakes I caught while reading through this before we discuss lengthening it. ^^ “Lovely grounds to stroll through when ...

Hallo! :} I am Aushy, and I came to review something I didn't read the first part of. *guilt trip* Okay. “We’re in,” Rae whispers, breaking off some of the ...

And I did something I promised I'd never do; never, EVER, review just a random chapter in someone's book without even looking at the rest. Terribly sorry. As a reader ...

Hallo there. :} I'm Aushy, and I shall be reviewing your poem today. I'm not so good at poems, so let's see how I do reviewing them! So, it started ...

Hallo there, I'm Aushy, and I shall review this. :} This was really good. I did enjoy it. It was short and to the point. I'm hoping you'll make a ...