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I can understand why you inserted multiple question marks and exclamation points, but unfortunately, it's grammatically incorrect and takes a bit away from your piece. Sorry about being too lazy ...

I also can't wait for your next chapters to be out. You have talent in writing! So...Possessed is a spectacular title; it just doesn't fit your novel. I would say ...

I guess that it could count for a great temporary title. is your main focus trying to get more reviewers? :) Well, it was mine with The Cobra's Cage...now I'm ...

No problem! And Possessed would be great...but the plot doesn't necessarily center around her belief that she's being possessed. Wait, is she actually possessed? Are the voices encouraging her to ...

Thank you! That really helped!

Whoa. It's possible to see one of my drafts? By the way, I'm completely revising that, but I love your suggestion and hope to add it...thanks!

Thank you so much! I've admittedly been having some problems on incorporating the setting, as my primary focus is maintaining fluency, but I'll take your words into account :D.

Ha ha, it took me much longer to find the edit button. I hope that I can help with the title when you submit more of this--I can't wait!

Thanks! I'm actually "unpublishing" this, because I wrote a far better (well, I hope) version...

Wow, thanks for taking the time! I actually intended to "unpublish" this, because I wrote a far better (well, I hope) version...

Thanks for the review! You definitely deserve points for writing it, so remember to click the "yes/no" button before submission! About the "Harsh, brutal. Inhuman" thing...your suggestion is perfect f

Thanks for commenting. Whoa, I feel like that novel was from a long while back...I hope that I've improved since then!

I love how you re-edited it, by the way!

No problem!

Thanks, that was really detailed! What I meant by "daggers exploring her store of memories" was that her life flashed before her eyes...although I'd be fine with trading that description ...