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Hey! I'm not rating this a review, because it's not much of a help, but... Amazing piece! You've really captured the Battle of Thermopylae well! Wonderful fluency and word choice; ...

No problem! For some odd reason, my reviews are longer on better works...I guess it's because I have the freedom to focus on smaller things.

Yeah...I apologize for not reading it carefully.

By the way, congrats on getting the Spotlight!

Okay, this is me being geeky...but that golden light didn't shine until he was in the TARDIS. Saddest moment of Doctor Who, him moaning, "I don't want go", right? Thanks ...

Thanks, and welcome to YWS :)!

Thank you so much!

Thanks, I'm glad you understand!

No problem!

Thanks! I used Gollum because it's found more in the Hobbit, in case any Hobbit fans wanted to read this.

Same! I'm a new poet, and sometimes I cheat and use RhymeZone :).

Same! I'm a new poet, and sometimes I cheat and use RhymeZone :).

Thanks! Now that you point that out, I completely agree. I admit, it's difficult finding a balance between Gollum-speech and toddler-speech :). My original words were "loud, loud, loud hiss." ...

Moonlight, sunlight, leaves, and wind are favorite nature topics of mine. For some reason, flowers are more difficult for me. I can't wait to see more of your work in ...

:) Those "writing trances" occur to me, too. I tend to write brokenly, though, if I'm only trying to get an idea down, so I applaud you. Very fluid!